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General
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1. What is the best feature of this paragraph?
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Paper Format
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2. Is the format correct? Does it look like the model?
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Organization and Content
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3. Topic sentence: Is there a clear topic sentence? Does it have a controlling idea?
4. Supporting sentences: Is the main idea clear? Does the writer need to add more details to explain it?
5. Concluding sentence: Is there a concluding sentence? Does it begin with an appropriate end-of-paragraph signal?
6. Unity: Do all of the sentences support the topic sentence?
7. Coherence: Do the sentences flow smoothly? Are there any inconsistent pronouns? Are transition signals used?
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Sentence Structure
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8. Are there any unclear sentences? Can you suggest a way to improve them?
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Grammar and Mechanics
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9. Are there any errors in grammar and mechanics?
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